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Legacy_TheButterflyEffect

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« on: April 07, 2012, 02:10:31 am »


                Okay, currently I'm working on a very adult themed module. It's for female human protagonists only.

Basically, the premise is, the PC is the daughter of a wealthy and highly respected knight, living in a small rural village. Her mother died when she was very young, and her father has recently died from an illness. The year is 1376, and the protagonist's age is not specific, but she's a young woman in her late teens or early twenties.

She's very beautiful, and the local lord's son has taken a fancy to her and asked for her hand in marriage, however, she turns him down because he's pretty much a colossal jerk. This absolutely enrages him, and one night he comes with a bunch of his father's men and raids their estate. He brutally murders her brother in front of her, then proceeds to violently rape her and beat her. Afterwards, he burns down her house and throws her into a ditch on the side of the road outside the village, leaving her for dead.

Then, to summarize the rest, a man from a thieves' guild, who witnessed the entire thing, rescues her from the watery ditch and takes her the leader of his guild in the capital city, who decides to take her in. She then has to try and build a new life.

Does it sound reasonably interesting? (like I said, it's adult themed, so there will be a lot of graphic violence and sexual content.)
               
               

               
            

Legacy_Mystery X

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« Reply #1 on: April 07, 2012, 06:29:34 am »


               I think you can give your protagonist a suitably tragic back story without the rape and beating.  Fantasy violence involving swords and spells and mythic creatures is one thing; sexual violence and domestic violence is going to be too real to a lot of people to be the cornerstone of a fun game.
               
               

               
            

Legacy_Skildron

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« Reply #2 on: April 07, 2012, 08:39:57 am »


               What about "A Dance With Rogues"? The module series starts with a rape of the heroine, too - but not in graphic detail, only in dialog choices. And by the way, ButterflyEffect, the outline of your module story sounds very similar to the mentioned module. Don't just redo something that is already there and is very good.

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Legacy_TheButterflyEffect

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« Reply #3 on: April 07, 2012, 06:49:33 pm »


               It's inspired by ADWR, but it's not the same. A number of elements will be very different. Among other things, the whole "princess" deal is out the window. (a lot of ideas are acutally inspired by a novel called "Pillars of the Earth".)
               
               

               


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Legacy_Elhanan

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« Reply #4 on: April 07, 2012, 10:19:13 pm »


               It sounds sim to an episode of The Highlander. Be certain to make yours stand by itself.

FWIW - These mods have little appeal for me anyway. I stopped playing ADWR shortly into the mod due to profanity and content. Personally, I believe the content was handled much better in DAO with the City Elf Orgin, if one is seeking a decent model.
               
               

               
            

Legacy_Skildron

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« Reply #5 on: April 07, 2012, 10:32:01 pm »


               

TheButterflyEffect wrote...

It's inspired by ADWR, but it's not the same. A number of elements will be very different. Among other things, the whole "princess" deal is out the window. (a lot of ideas are acutally inspired by a novel called "Pillars of the Earth".)


I see - Aliena's story has inspired you. All in all, it sounds interesting enough to give it a try when you have it ready or to help you beta test it, if you would like.

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Legacy_Luminus

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« Reply #6 on: April 17, 2012, 10:47:16 pm »


               I would suggest making this module for NwN2, since nothing except Sex and the Single Adventuress, exists on it. As far as I am aware of, that is. NwN1 has A Dance with Rogues which are top-notch and Arandie. I am sure there are more, but these are the most well-known, I think.

NwN2 needs modules like that and more people will play them.

No offense but the whole "daughter of a noble (knight in this case) that is raped and tried to be murdered, then rescued and trained by thieves" is way too similar to A Dance with Rogues.
I would change that part if I were you.

Maybe thrown to the sea and rescued by Pirates? Or rescued by Gypsies? Some suggestions.

Just some constructive criticism, I really hope you proceed with it and realize it.'<img'> But I personally vote you try making it on NwN2.
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #7 on: April 19, 2012, 02:25:24 am »


               ???

If he truly wanted her wouldn't it make more sense for him to take her AFTER burning her house down and killing her brother?

A better idea though:

The young woman is caring for her brother who is actually a child. The noble guy kills the child in front of the woman and then forcefully takes her back to his estate and makes the whole attack seem like a bandit attack.

Somehow the young woman escapes and then proceeds to expose the noble guy. Perhaps allow the player two choices:

1) The woman can undertake an aggressive campaign where she tries to kill the noble.
2) The woman can undertake a more passive campaign where she tries to prove the noble was responsible for the attack. This route leads down investigating and dialogue choices.

Include multiple endings where the woman can either succeed in her task or fail. One good ending could be where she does kill the noble but since she never exposed him as a murderer, she herself is executed as one.

You really don't have to include rape to make it an adult module or you could at least allow the woman a way to escape. For example, as the noble is taking the woman back to his estate via some cart or whatever, you can use statistics or skills to get away free otherwise she does end up raped but still escapes through some other means afterwards.

I think you should concentrate on choices with consequences. The module could easily have a dark setting too where the woman could sell her body to earn gold or even murder innocents just to achieve her quests but there should be consequences for each action.
               
               

               


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Legacy_Knight_Shield

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« Reply #8 on: April 20, 2012, 06:13:15 pm »


               I think you have a good start..and learning and training with the thieves guild interesting.I dont mean to jump to the end but sounds like there could be a pretty epic ending where her true identity is made known to the collosal jerk right before she feeds him to some kind of monster he thought he was going to buy from her to feed his peasants to.Didnt mean to ramble ..seen your story and it jump started my brain.Most stories that get people are tragic.
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #9 on: May 06, 2012, 02:29:30 am »


               Sounds interesting. Would love to see more projects similar to ADwR.
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #10 on: May 17, 2012, 04:27:50 pm »


               Female protagonists seeks men slaves to add to her collection?

I'd probably set the storyline / plot to be something along the lines of a rise to power....

Power is a very alluring hook, one which should include the basis of the module, with the female protagonists clearly in mind, e.g. her desires...

Anyway, hope that helps.. '<img'>