Soliciting feedback on Arnheim Character Creation

[Legacy_henesua]

               I have been massaging the documentation for character creation in Arnheim. I'd like your feedback on it. Feed back of any kind is welcome. Criticism, praise. Its all good. What you take aim at is entirely up to you as well, but I am curious what players think of the mix of powers and abilities. I can still make changes before we start playing in the module. Once the next game night occurs however... it will be harder to make changes.

I am also interested in hearing about how confusing my documentation is. If you can think of ways to clarify it, please speak up. I know I am not a great writer (or even a particularly good one) so it won't hurt my feelings to be told how to improve.

You can leave feedback here or over on this longer thread which documents my process in arriving at many of the choices I have made.
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Rolo Kipp]

               <looking pretty...>

Goddess! It's scary how alike we think. I mean Arnheim is a completely different setting than Amethyst, our races (and classes, even) are quite different. But you are already going places I'm just planning out :-)

Sweet :-) "When in doubt, send a scout!"

(continuing conversation in Google Docs...)

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