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« Reply #765 on: April 01, 2011, 01:21:01 am »


               WHERE ARE HIS HORNS?! -dies, is raised-

My muse wants to write Valen/Elizabeth. She does not, however, want to write the currently needed chapters fo either story. x_x Damn her.

*cough* Yes. Anyways, I am writing soome oneshots to motivate my muse. I'll put some up here when I'm done. '<img'> What do you guys think Elizabeth's True Name should be;
Viedania the Unbeliever
Nac'bisna the Broken
Brenaria the Knower
Aluynesca the Devilslayer (Buffy anyone? xD)

Your opinion shall decide and once I have her True Name I can write moar! -runs off-
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #766 on: April 01, 2011, 07:24:48 am »


               @D-D, I am still awaiting for ART's new chapter. Please don't give it up. I want you to continue.
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #767 on: April 01, 2011, 08:40:34 am »


               I haven't given it up, I am trying to decide what I want to do with A.R.T. I'm leaning towards a nice bittersweet ending....
Really, I'm Not a Hero has  caught my attention more because I love the new PC for it, an aasimar named Rikardo, and because Liz and Valen's relationship is, quite honestly, much more complex and realistic.

"Oh...gods," Elizabeth stumbled slightly, holding her blood-soaked hands to the gash in her side. Valen heard her spit out quite a few of her choiciest swears, and turned to see her hunched over and holding her side.
"Are you alright? Are you hurt?" Valen asked worriedly, rushing over to her.
"Don't mind me, you're injured!" she said quickly, gesture to the blood that slowly dripped down his forehead.
"It's nothing, I'll take care of it later, let me see to you first." He turned her around, much to her protest, and examined the heavily bleeding wound. "Hold on, let me get a healing potion."
"That's unneccassary, I'm fine-" she was cut off as a wave of pain hit her and she doubled over with agony.
"Don't be stupid, Elizabeth, you're gushing blood!" Valen scolded, snatching a healing potion from his pack and forcing her to drink the blue liquid. He ignored her as he coughed slightly and pulled her into a tight embrace.
"Sometimes you cause me a great deal of worry, my love." he told her.
"Valen, you can't protect me from everything." Elizabeth murmured. His grip on her tightened slightly.
"I will shield you with my life if I must."
"What? No!" she squirmed in his grip slightly, glaring up at him. "You are *not* going to die for me!"
"I will do whatever I needto ensure your safety." he said stubbornly.
"Foolish male." she whispered; he chuckled slightly.
"I think Nathyrra has been a bad influence on you, my love."
"Maybe. But you *are* foolish if you think I could bear living without you."
"I know. I suppose I am foolish. Can my lady ever forgive me?"
"Forgiven," her eyes glinted with amusment. "But don't try it again, male!" she smacked his arm lightly.
"Never, mistress" he teased.
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #768 on: April 01, 2011, 07:08:09 pm »


               New chapter for I'm Not a Hero
A.R.T should be updated next. '^_^'
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #769 on: April 01, 2011, 08:22:50 pm »


               

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I haven't given it up, I am trying to decide what I want to do with A.R.T. I'm leaning towards a nice bittersweet ending....
Really, I'm Not a Hero has  caught my attention more because I love the new PC for it, an aasimar named Rikardo, and because Liz and Valen's relationship is, quite honestly, much more complex and realistic.

-snipped piece of fluffiness


D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW<3>

               
            

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« Reply #770 on: April 01, 2011, 11:07:58 pm »


               Wow, I haven't posted in a while. Why? I bought Dragon Age: Origins. I plan to buy DA2 when I finish Origins... also, I've been looking at DA2 clips, and I'm slowly becoming a Fenris fangirl. Dammit!

Still have lots of love for dear Valen, though. '<3'

So...

D-D: Excellent fanfic as always. I melted with awesome. Also, I suggest Viedania the Unbeliever - it flows better, and the Knower thing should stay with The Knowers. Unless Liz is a Knower... '<img'>
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #771 on: April 02, 2011, 01:49:19 am »


               Maybe she is. Maybe she isn't. Who knows?

I've been working on Liz's accent (I'm doing her voice-overs myself), and so far she sounds like a mix of Russian and Indian. Thought I'd leave ya with that. '<img'>

The party walked through the snowy drifts of Cania at a brutal pace. Elizabeth decided that, for an aasimar, Rikardo was very unforgiving. She then felt guilty; Rik was a celestial stuck in the Hells, of course he wasn't doing well! The bardic sorcerer was her old friend, she had to comfort him. She was loathed to leave Valen's side, though, and she was forced to wonder, which was worse to have in the Hells, Infernal blood or Celestial? And thanks to Mephistopheles, Rikardo was the Duke of Cania, if she understood the events right. His very blood would be screaming at him to kill himself. She exhaled deeply, released Valen's hand, and tried to walk faster.

Her feet caught onto each other, and she tripped; she let out a shrill shriek as she tumbled towards the ice. Strong arms wrapped around her and stopped her fall, and she found herself staring into the blue eyes of her tiefing lover.
"And so, the knight in shining armor saves his maiden fair from possible concussion?" Rikardo deadpanned, his pupil-less gold eyes alight with humor.
"Stuff it, Celestial!" Elizabeth growled playfully as she stood up straight.
"I don't think I qualify as a knight in shining armor," Valen said to his friend. "And I've never heard of a love story with a tiefling before."
"Then my book shall be original!" Rik declared. "'Sides, you two are no stranger then the aasimar and the drow assassin, isn't that right love?" He pulled Nathyrra close and squeezed her backside.
Nathyrra rolled her eyes and pushed him away slightly. "Oh, get over yourself, male!"
Elizabeth pretended to gag; Max really did.
"Kay, you four done yet?" the feline asked with a sigh.
"Tell him to go away." Rik sighed.
"Ku yfyo!" Liz giggled, shooing her guardian.
"Fine, fine, I go get Scales." Max muttered, walking away swiftly.

Scales is Deekin
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #772 on: April 02, 2011, 06:56:26 am »


               Mix of Russian and Indian? D-D, If Liz was a man, I would already be changing my panties. Purr...
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #773 on: April 02, 2011, 07:43:08 pm »


               Well, she has a tiefling brother with horns and a tail who sounds the same. '<img'> -throws Helumyc to the fangirls-
Not that the stupid perv cares. >_>
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #774 on: April 02, 2011, 08:20:28 pm »


               Oh, no, no, I'm already into some other tiefling with horns and tail >3 Fangirls can keep Liz's brothers as long as I can lock myself with Valen in the closet >3

-Valen blushes as he feels the heated stare on his back-
Oh yes... >3 And loose the key... >3
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #775 on: April 02, 2011, 08:39:40 pm »


               Helumyc: D: I GOT TRUMPED BY A DEMONSPAWN?! but I know a sexy massage and everything. -would run and cry in a corner, but is too manly-
Elizabeth: Face it, bro; you may be a tiefling, but they know you don't got those 'demonic proportions' 'Image
Helumyc: -raegface-
Elizabeth: O_O -runs and hides in closet with Drima and Valen-
Me: There there, 'myc, I still love you. -huggles her creation-
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #776 on: April 02, 2011, 09:13:34 pm »


               Yes, that's the moment when you can go all fangirl mode over him an yell "HE'S MINE, BIOTCHES!" and be completely right. 8D

-eyes Elizabeth from around the embarrased Valen-
Oh, hai thar! >3 You are falling into your creator's footsteps? Well, at least now there's no crowd to interrupt us >3
               
               

               


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« Reply #777 on: April 02, 2011, 10:06:43 pm »


               Elizabeth: Wha...wh-what are you talking about? -eyes Drima warily- Demon, what does she mean, 'falling into my creator's footsteps?'
Me: Weeeeeell...you know that thing you did with Mano and your sister?
Elizabeth: WE WERE TO NEVER SPEAK OF THAT AGAIN. -realizes something- Wait...you mean... Oh. Well...crap.

Yes, my character had a drunken threesome with her ex-boyfriend and her sister. She is ashamed. Mano, said ex boyfriend...holds that memory very dear. xD Also...they *may* meet Mano in Cania.

Okay. They will. And Mano...let's just say he doesn't realize he and Liz are broken up. Or that she's moved on to Valen. And he doesn't really understand the term 'personal boundaries.' x3
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #778 on: April 03, 2011, 07:43:19 am »


               Sounds like fun xDDD
-gasp- You gave in to spoilering! D-D! What happened to Evil Cliffhanger's Queen?

No, really, Liz, are you in or are you out? But think about it before you decide! It's Valen! And he's already half naked >333
               
               

               
            

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« Reply #779 on: April 03, 2011, 08:03:53 am »


               Hey, I'm tired...and I lost my Evil Cliffhanger's Queen mask...and I'm listening to Lady Gaga.
Okay, that last one was irrelevant.

Elizabeth: Can we have some chains and whips? They...excite me. '<3' And maybe a bit of sexual roleplaying? Ooh, We can be evil mistresses and we just caught Vay-vay breaking some rules!

what, she's freaky. xD