The Valen Shadowbreath thread :)

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               

dirtsa90 wrote...

Deliciously-Demonic wrote...
*snip*

Which reminds me...I need to write a consummation dialogue. So we can really get down and dirty in the middle of Cania.

I like the way you think

As does my inner PTF. She's cackling away at the moment, eating cake and sipping wine...maniaclly. 

PTF: That's right, darling, now get to writing! -cracks whip menacingly-

D: -runs back to Microsoft Word-
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Drima]

               

dirtsa90 wrote...

Deliciously-Demonic wrote...
*snip*

Which reminds me...I need to write a consummation dialogue. So we can really get down and dirty in the middle of Cania.

I like the way you think

I like it, too. Keep going.
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               GAH OF ALL EFFIN GAAAAH! D:<

BLEGH. My toolset started frickin up and became unusable, but the only way to reinstall my toolset is to reinstall my game, so I went backed-up my save games, modules and stuff and uninstalled it, then went back to the installation program and APPARENTLY it's CORRUPTED. So NOW I have to go back to GOG.com, redownload the Downloader, then re-download NWN, and only THEN can I attempt to put my new dialogues in.

;-; I hate technology sometimes.
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Drima]

               

Deliciously-Demonic wrote...

GAH OF ALL EFFIN GAAAAH! D:<

BLEGH. My toolset started frickin up and became unusable, but the only way to reinstall my toolset is to reinstall my game, so I went backed-up my save games, modules and stuff and uninstalled it, then went back to the installation program and APPARENTLY it's CORRUPTED. So NOW I have to go back to GOG.com, redownload the Downloader, then re-download NWN, and only THEN can I attempt to put my new dialogues in.

;-; I hate technology sometimes.

TT^TT Technology is a draaag.
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               Alright you drooling lechers, here it is, as promised (sorta); the sex 'consummation' scene:

You and your companions are taking a well-needed rest. The endless, white landscape has darkened into what you assume is night. Despite this, the cold nips at you mercilessly, making sleep nigh impossible.

You sit up under your blanket, and your gaze turns to Valen, who is on watch.
-Attempt a conversation 1.1
-Watch him 2.1

1.1; At the sound of your voice calling his name, the tiefling turns.
"Something wrong, my love?" he murmurs softly.

-I...I can't sleep. It's too cold.
-Nothing's wrong, I just...

"I see." His gaze searches your face with worry. "You look like your freezing; hold on." He unwraps his own blanket from his body, and covers you with it gently. "There." He smiles at you, then turns to go back to his station.

-[Grab his hand] Wait... 1.2
-Thank you. [END DIALOGUE] -rest

2.1; Your eyes take in his strong, tall, muscular frame, his crimson locks undone from their usual ponytail and casually cascading down his shoulders. In spite of any attempts to be discreet, he can sense your gaze wandering up and down his body.
Something wrong, my love?" he murmurs softly.

-I...I can't sleep. It's too cold.
-Nothing's wrong, I just...

"I see." His gaze searches your face with worry. "You look like your freezing; hold on." He unwraps his own blanket from his body, and covers you with it gently. "There." He smiles at you, then turns to go back to his station.

-[Grab his hand] Wait... 1.2
-Thank you. [END DIALOGUE] -rest

1.2; He pauses as your hand grasps his own, and looks back towards you. "Yes?" he asks, voice trembling slightly.

-I don't want you to get cold, my love. 1.3
-Why don't I join you on watch? 1.4

1.3; "I don't feel cold like you do, my love." he grins bitterly. "Just another perk to having Tanar'ri blood."

-Why don't I join you on watch? 1.4
-Well...thank you. [END DIALOGUE] -rest

1.4; He raises a crimson eyebrow a few shades. "You need your rest, <FirstName>."

-I...suppose you're right. [END DIALOGUE] -rest
-I don't feel tired in the slightest. [grin at him] 1.5

1.5; Valen looks as if he's sorely tempted to let you, but shakes his head. "It...it wouldn't be safe. You're already too...tempting." He sighs and sits back down at his post.

-...Good night, Valen. [END DIALOGUE] -rest
-[sneak up behind him and wrap your arms around his neck] That's just a risk we'll have to take, yes? 1.6

1.6; You feel Valen trembling slightly under your hands, as if he's trying to fight something inside him. Before you can realize what is happening, he stands up swiftly, turning on heel to face you, and kisses your mouth roughly. When he releases you, he murmurs into your ear, "Why must you be so hard to resist, <FirstName>?"

-[Kiss him] 1.8
-Just part of my charm, Valen. 1.7

1.7; The tiefling grins at you, then leans down to kiss you more softly. 1.8

1.8; When your lips meet again, it is more passionately then before. Valen holds you close to his body, no longer trembling. His tail snakes it's way up your thigh, giving it a possessive squeeze. Valen's hands slide up your shirt the smallest bit, his  warm hands coming to rest on your lower back. 1.9

1.9; You forget all your worries and troubles. You forget that you're in Cania; all there is is you and him. The tastes, the scents, the sights, the feelings; they all flood your senses, making it clear that you are the only things that matter on that cold, clear Cania night. [END DIALOGUE] -rest

-faints- that was so hard to write without getting all giggly. xD
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Meeszy Alexy]

               ...I need a cold shower.

Also, I came up with a random idea for a comic: of Valen getting sick of the attention he gets from the female Drow (if you know what I mean '>) and him trying to escape from them... this includes a strange shower scene where Valen realises he's being watched by pervy drow fangirls and grabs somebody else to be in his place instead...

I have a weird imagination, but poor drawing skills, so... *pout*
               
               

               

                     Modifié par Meeszy Alexy, 05 mars 2011 - 06:12 .
                     
                  

            

[Legacy_Drima]

               ...Oh, my... 8'D

That  mod of yours is going to be a marvelous piece I just HAVE to have. <3>

               
            

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               I know why I love this thread. It loves me back. :'D

If anyone has any suggestions for more dialogues, I would love to hear them!

Ooh, new ideas: pulling his tail (with snarky Nathyrra interjection), poking him, flicking/kissing him horns and asking him if he was ever intimate with a female drow (thanks for that idea, Meeszy!)
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               gah no site is safe not even deviantart please help me wash my mind I accidently discovered an Anders spoiler! Dx



ahhh, much better. :3 -is able to go back to writing without twitching violently-
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Drima]

               xDDDDDDD
I stopped spoiling myself with the new year. Occasional nips at the dA can't hurt me. -evil laugh-
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               I remember when this was only nine pages long and I was just figuring out who Valen was.

Now it's 23 pages, I'm a devoted member of his cult, and I'm working avidly on a flirtpack.

Ah, we've had some good times in here.
               
               

               
            

[Legacy_dirtsa90]

               @DD
What a lovely "consummation" scene I think you write Valen very well (or maybe just how I want him to be )

I'm sorry about the Anders spoiler you mentioning seeing on dA, but that artwork is just: De-licious! Good thing we have those small pieces of hotness to bleach our brain with when the spoilers attack.
               
               

               

                     Modifié par dirtsa90, 05 mars 2011 - 11:41 .
                     
                  

            

[Legacy_Deliciously-Demonic]

               

dirtsa90 wrote...

@DD
What a lovely "consummation" scene I think you write Valen very well (or maybe just how I want him to be )

I'm sorry about the Anders spoiler you mentioning seeing on dA, but that artwork is just: De-licious! Good thing we have those small pieces of hotness to bleach our brain with when the spoilers attack.

Haha, I'm glad you guys think he's in-character. I'm always paranoid about that when I right fan-fiction or dialogues.  I must admit that Alistair is the easiest character I've ever had the pleasure of using in a story. He's...ah...rather simple. In a good way.
I want to put my dialogues up on Petals and Thorns, but I'm hesitant because I'm still rather new there. That's the only reason I haven't asked to take over the Valen Flirtpack already. Well, that and my rather limited knowledge of scripting.

Anyways, I...-looks at Valen picture again-

...nevermind. Not important.

Valen~ <>

EDIT -- Oh yes, what I have so far for my module (plot- and companion-wise)
http://www.petalsand...p?p=88996#88996
               
               

               

                     Modifié par Deliciously-Demonic, 05 mars 2011 - 11:50 .
                     
                  

            

[Legacy_dirtsa90]

               Valen <3>


Anyways it´s pretty late so goodnight everyone, I hope you all have sweet Valen(and Fenris for the Fen-girls) filled dreams. 


EDIT: I´ll check the site out when I´m home tomorrow (and not using my BF´s laptop)
               
               

               

                     Modifié par dirtsa90, 05 mars 2011 - 11:55 .
                     
                  

            

[Legacy_mordy_was_here]

               

Deliciously-Demonic wrote...

dirtsa90 wrote...

@DD
What a lovely "consummation" scene I think you write Valen very well (or maybe just how I want him to be )

I'm sorry about the Anders spoiler you mentioning seeing on dA, but that artwork is just: De-licious! Good thing we have those small pieces of hotness to bleach our brain with when the spoilers attack.

Haha, I'm glad you guys think he's in-character. I'm always paranoid about that when I right fan-fiction or dialogues.  I must admit that Alistair is the easiest character I've ever had the pleasure of using in a story. He's...ah...rather simple. In a good way.
I want to put my dialogues up on Petals and Thorns, but I'm hesitant because I'm still rather new there. That's the only reason I haven't asked to take over the Valen Flirtpack already. Well, that and my rather limited knowledge of scripting.

Anyways, I...-looks at Valen picture again-

...nevermind. Not important.

Valen~ <>

EDIT -- Oh yes, what I have so far for my module (plot- and companion-wise)
http://www.petalsand...p?p=88996#88996

Hey D-D, Auddi from P&T here. My first post (well, one of my first posts) on those boards was about my module. Mynfel was kind enough to give me a workspace right after that. Don't be shy - try asking her in a PM if she could set you up with a workspace down in the mod section.