HE HAS AN EARRING?! WHY WAS I NOT NOTIFIED?! D:<
-is totally not overreacting, nope, not at all-
And now, because I'm just a really, really, really nice person, I made a dialogue in which Valen reads you...THE POEM! (only works if you have Deekin in your party, though. Dx)
[Deekin] - "Goatman? Yous still got Deekin's other quill?"
[Valen] - "Huh?" Valen jumps, startled. He turns towards Deekin with a slightly raised eyebrow. "What happened to yours?"
[Deekin] - He holds up a frozen feather, snapped neatly in half and unusable. "You gots other quill?"
[Valen] - The tiefling, noticing your stare, blushes faintly. "Er, yes."
[Deekin] - "Can you gives it to Deekin please?"
[Valen] - "Hasn't your ink frozen solid yet?" Valen snaps irritiably.
[Deekin] - "Deekin's ink be enchanted! It never freeze!"
[Valen] - Muttering to himself, the tiefling fishes in his pack for a moment before returning the (albiet slightly bent) quill.
[PC] - "Why did you need to borrow Deekin's quill?" 1.1
[PC] - Say nothing [END DIALOGUE]
1.1 [Valen] - He jumps again, blushing returning, before looking at you for a moment, obviously uncomfortable.
[Valen] - "I...uh...w-wrote a poem...for you." he stammers nervously, his eyes now watching the snowy ground.
[PC] - Will you read it to me?
[Valen] - "My lady..."
[PC] - Please? [make puppy eyes] 1.2
[PC] - Ah, spoilsport. [END DIALOGUE]
1.2 [Valen] - Unable to resist, the tiefling sighs and agrees.
[Valen] - He pulls a small piece of parchment out of his pack, and clears his throat, before beginning to recite uncertaintly.
[Valen] - "Through Abyssal Pits, and Hells of cold; Across Celestial Heights, and Seas of Gold; I cannot be kept from you. From the Astral Depths and Wastes of Grey; By the gates of Sigil with beasts at play; I will always wait for you."
[Valen] - "Neither death nor fear nor power scorn'd, Shall make my vow of love forsworn'd. My soul, my flesh, my heart is true; these with Eternity, my gift to you."
[Valen] - His blue eyes burn into your own with sudden earnest. "It's a bit silly, isn't it?" he laughs nervously.
[PC] - [Tear up] 2.1
[PC] - It's not silly, not at all. 2.2
[PC] - [Kiss him] 2.3
[PC] - Actually, yeah, it is. 2.4
[PC] - You can be such a sap sometimes. [snicker] 2.4
2.1 [Valen] - He looks at you with concern as tears begin to fill your eyes, then realizes why you are tearing up. With a small smile, he places a small kiss on your forehead. "Let's continue, shall we, my love?" [END DIALOGUE]
2.2 [Valen] - He smiles briefly. "I'm glad you like it, my love." He steps forward and places a small kiss on your forehead. "Let's continue, however." [END DIALOGUE]
2.3 [Valen] - He blinks with surprise as your lips press against his own. For a moment he stands still with shock, then he gives in and begins to return your kiss gently. His fingers tangle in your hair, and his tail wraps around your waist possessively. With his free hand his cups your chin and tilts your head back deepening the kiss. Then, he remembers himself, and pulls back reluctantly. "We should...continue onwards." he manages, voice husky. Without another word, he releases you, and only casts a longing look in your direction as your party returns to the task at hand. [END DIALOGUE]
2.4 [Valen] - His face falls; obviously, your answer was not expected. "I...I thought you might say that." he mutters. "Let's just continue." [END DIALOGUE]
It's so hard to be mean to Valen; it's like throwing kittens into trees, setting said trees on fire, then using puppies to make field-goals.
Tell me if you think anyone's OOC. I'm not good at writing Deekin.
'> Once I figure out how to script this *only* to appear after the Confession, I'll put up the file somewhere.
Note; this is all written before I've had any coffee. I apologize for any grammatical or spelling errors.
Modifié par Deliciously-Demonic, 05 mars 2011 - 01:06 .
